M main.go → main.go

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ switch r.Method {
 	case "GET":
 		render(w, "templates/form.html", nil)
 	case "POST":
-		body := "> If you're a medic, did you, your medic buddy, or someone else you were working with do something that made you feel uncomfortable?\r\n\r\n" + r.PostFormValue("question1") +
+		body := "> Have you had an encounter with a North Star Medic that made you feel uncomfortable?\r\n\r\n" + r.PostFormValue("question1") +
 			"\r\n\r\n> Did anyone from the Northstar core, intake or dispatch teams do anything that made you feel uncomfortable?\r\n\r\n" + r.PostFormValue("question8") +
 			"\r\n\r\n> Are there things you would like to see Northstar do differently to better care for, and support our communities?\r\n\r\n" + r.PostFormValue("question2") +
 			"\r\n\r\n> Have you had an encounter with a medic that made you feel uncomfortable or disrespected?\r\n\r\n" + r.PostFormValue("question3") +

M templates/form.html → templates/form.html

@@ -450,12 +450,12 @@ </style>
 </head>
 
 <h1>Accountability For Medics</h1>
-<p>Have you had an encounter with a medic that made you feel uncomfortable? We know that we are in the work of building community care for the long-haul. We know that racism and oppression exist in all levels of our society, and that our revolutionary work is to continue to disrupt them everywhere - including in our own bodies. Are there things we should know? We are open to hearing about about negative, uncomfortable, or hurtful experiences with medics you've encountered so we can continue to build a movement that is grounded in healing, not continuing to replicate systemic violence.</p>
+<p>Have you had an encounter with a medic that made you feel uncomfortable? We know that we are in the work of building community care for the long-haul. We know that racism and all forms of oppression exist in every part of our communities, and we are committed to dismantling and disrupting these systems everywhere - including in our own bodies - as a part of our revolutionary work. Are there things we should know? We are open to hearing about about negative, uncomfortable, or hurtful experiences with medics you've encountered so we can continue to build a movement that is grounded in healing, not continuing to replicate systemic violence.</p>
 <p>North Star Health Collective is one of many groups using the name ‘medic’ in the Twin Cities in the last week.    We endeavor to be accountable to our community.    This information will be used to start conversations with the persons involved if we are able to identify them and to hold medics operating as part of NSHC to the agreements and protocols discussed in the vetting process.</p>
 <p>This form is anonymous and you do not have to leave us any identifying information. If you would like us to follow up with you, please feel free to leave contact information. If you don't want to do that, please leave it blank.</p>
 <form action="/" method="POST" novalidate>
   <div>
-    <p><label>If you're a medic, did you, your medic buddy, or someone else you were working with do something that made you feel uncomfortable?</label></p>
+    <p><label>Have you had an encounter with a North Star Medic that made you feel uncomfortable?</label></p>
     <p><textarea placeholder="Please describe to the best of your ability. Our goal is not to repeat the work of the carceral state, but to help hold each other accountability and support deep reflection and change in all the medics we are working with in the field." name="question1"></textarea></p>
   </div>
   <div>