M templates/reviews.html → templates/reviews.html

@@ -19,7 +19,12 @@ 10: a bonafide masterpiece. my highest recommendation
     11: OMG THESE THINGS GO TO 11??
     </pre>
 </details>
+<h4>2023</h4>
+<li>the last of us season 1 {10}</li>
+<li>everything everywhere all at once {11} - everyone should be legally required to watch this film</li>
 <h4>2022</h4>
+<li>iphone x {7} - mine has lasted ~4 years with minimal issues</li>
+<li>framework laptop {8} - it's great but has some issues</li>
 <li><a href="/review/morro-bay.html">morro bay {9}</a></li>
 <li><a href="/review/pixel-5a.html">pixel 5a {7}</a></li>
 <li><a href="/review/industrial-society-and-its-future.html">industrial society and its future {3}</a></li>

M thought/write-posix-shell.html → thought/write-posix-shell.html

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ 
            why do people hate shell?
 
   arcane syntax
-      shell's syntax is cumbersome and arcane
+      shell's syntax can feel cumbersome and cryptic
       because it was invented around the time
       people thought lawn darts were a good idea.
 
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ when shell grows beyond a few hundred lines
       or so, it becomes impossible to maintain.
 
   unique and weird
-      since shell has no "canonical form" shell scripts
+      since shell has no canonical format, shell scripts
       can look wildly different depending on the author,
       which furthers confusion.
 
@@ -279,6 +279,10 @@ 
   here's a cool arch wiki entry[8] on shells, check out
   the posix section.
 
+  shellcheck[9] is an amazing script to check your shell for
+  posix compatability issues. i use it every time i write
+  more than a few dozen lines of shell.
+
 
                       :D
 
@@ -315,3 +319,4 @@ [5]: https://git.sr.ht/~sircmpwn/shit
 [6]: https://github.com/biox/pa
 [7]: https://git.j3s.sh/dotfiles/tree/main/bin
 [8]: https://wiki.archlinux.org/title/command-line_shell
+[9]: https://www.shellcheck.net